Laura remembers being impatient with her father, when he discovered symbols of the four elements in a shopping mall’s design.
Water, earth, air and fire: he had spotted representations of all of them.
She was carrying too many parcels, frustrated by needing to ask him to help with her burden, and only after his death does she recall this incident, wondering if he had been searching for some essential truth.
There is a mystery surrounding her father’s death.
Readers are aware of the complicated circumstances before Laura is, because Will Ferguson’s narrative affords access to a variety of voices, so readers know that there is more than one set of tire-tracks leading off the road.
The multiple perspectives and the intricate plotting keep the pages turning, but at the heart of it all, 419 revolves around the idea that what appears to be true at first glance is actually much more complicated.
And, so, the segments in 419 are not named for the elements, but for more complex representations of these vital substances: snow, sand, fuel, fire.
Each of these has connections to each of the narrative’s threads (literally or figuratively), either in memory or in real-time events that unfold on the page.
The thematic layering works to maintain a cohesive narrative despite a format of short chapters which, increasingly, sprawl across continents and narrators as more complications are revealed. Unexpected connections and parallels between characters’ experiences also work to smooth the edges as do overt demonstrations of the author’s crafting.
The work is titled for the section of the Nigerian Criminal Code that “deals with obtaining money or goods under false pretenses. Any kind of fraud, really. It’s entered the lexicon over there.”
Anyone with an email address has likely received an invitation to such ventures, e-mails requesting assistance with investing sums of money overseas or securing passage for innocents in dangerous situations. Most recipients think nothing of these letters, perhaps don’t even see them if a mail program’s spam filter is set up to block them.
“But don’t be fooled: 419 is a business. It brings in hundreds of millions of dollars a year. It’s bigger than Nigeria; it’s as old as sin. As old as desire. These 419ers, they prey on people’s dreams. Average loss in a 419 scam is somewhere to the tune of $250,000 – often more. The going rate for dreams, apparently.”
But don’t be fooled; the detective has a clear cut analysis of the situation, but in Will Ferguson’s novel, it is more complicated than that.
Many of these 419ers spend long days working with bulk mailings that flood inboxes around the world but for Winston, a day working with these letters is not just a way to pay his bills but an art. He spends a great deal of time perfecting his contact with individuals who will be more likely to respond to particular requests, rewriting content so that it speaks to the targets’ individual situations, deliberately wording and timing his efforts.
Winston’s long, solitary work day is detail-oriented, often overlooked as insignificant, and lonely: not all that different from Laura’s work as a freelance copyeditor. It is one of many parallels which subtly unifies the work. In one scene, Winston speaks of fishing with words, of netting and hooking and spearing the targets of 419s. In another scene, there is a father and son actually fishing. In one scene, a North American police officer mentions Lagos Lagoon and in the next a Nigerian character observes the lagoon.
But even that, ‘Nigerian’, is a scam from some perspectives.
“It was a net loosely thrown, a name on a map, one created by the British to paper over the gaping cracks in the joinery. A conjurer’s trick, where the many became one, a sleight of hand, like the tired magic of old men making coins disappear. ‘There is no Nigeria.’ This was the first lesson her uncle had wished to impart. ‘There is Fulani and Hausa, Igbo and Tiv, Efik and Kanuri, Gwari and Yoruba. But Nigeria? That is only the pail we carry these in.’”
And those who have thrown the net are, from some perspectives, scammers.
“‘We are tax collectors, Adam. We charge a tax on greed. We should be congratulated, not prosecuted, and yet it is we who are called the criminals. Criminals! They talk about Nigerian’s ‘culture of corruption’. What of Europe’s ‘culture of greed’? What of America’s? What of these oyibos agreeing to schemes that are so clearly illegal, were they to be true?'”
The stories of residents in the land colonized as Nigeria comprise the bulk of 419, and Will Ferguson does not falsely simplify the differences between them, whether in speaking of the superficial or more inherently complex issues like social class.
(For instance, Amina is from the Sahel, with its savannah tastes and scents and clear air, a land of crumbling soil that turns to sand in her hand; her skin is the colour of “old clay, of dust, of sand”, she bears scars that identify her kinship lines, and she is accustomed to eating lamb, groundnuts, beef, onions and greens. In contrast, Nnamdi has the “dark sheen of oil, as though it had soaked into his skin” from the sticky southern lands, the soil so dark and oily that it marks the soils of one’s feet, and he eats mostly fish, plantains, sugar, cocoyams and cassava.)
Tax collectors and criminals, militia and bank employees, police officers and roadside gangs, parents and children, thieves and children, fathers and murderers: Will Ferguson’s novel is set in an arena which is inherently compelling and readers can track the plot as narrative lines echo and converge.
Some characters pursue, others are the pursued; some change roles as the story progresses.
“But here, under this open sky? On these open plains? Where would you hide? Where could you hide? A single body cast a long presence out here. Hunters could track you simply by the shadow you trailed, even in moonlight. You would have to run very far to escape.”
If you don’t have tire-tracks or a desert to assist you, how do you track someone who does not want to be found? How does a single sender cast a shadow in an email?
How do you track the love of a man who has died with secrets that you don’t understand? When one profits from a situation that also helps somebody, how much of the motivation is greed and how much kindness?
What happens when some hunt by shadows and others avoid even stepping on them because that would be to step on a soul? How do you define ‘hunter’ and ‘hunted’ in the context of a legacy of colonialism?
When you break down the elements of a human life, are the subject headings the same matters of importance that appear on a bank statement, a police incident report, or in an email exchange?
One simple statement reverberates throughout the narrative and the stories of several characters: “Loss demands repayment.”
But the answer is rooted in elemental truths that complicate the question of currency.
Will Ferguson’s novel reaches beyond the armful of shopping bags and the bulging spam filter; 419 scrapes back the layers to reveal what really matters.
I’m reading my way through the 2012 Giller Prize longlist: have you read this novel, or are you thinking about reading it?
[…] Buried in Print: “One simple statement reverberates throughout the narrative and the stories of several characters: ‘Loss demands repayment.’ But the answer is rooted in elemental truths that complicate the question of currency. Will Ferguson’s novel reaches beyond the armful of shopping bags and the bulging spam filter; 419 scrapes back the layers to reveal what really matters.” […]
[…] Buried in Print: “One simple statement reverberates throughout the narrative and the stories of several characters: ‘Loss demands repayment.’ But the answer is rooted in elemental truths that complicate the question of currency. Will Ferguson’s novel reaches beyond the armful of shopping bags and the bulging spam filter; 419 scrapes back the layers to reveal what really matters.” […]
Pass? On the Giller shortlist? **gasp**
Seriously, though, I’m just waiting for my library hold request to work its way through the system, at which point I will certainly be taking it on. And I won’t be jumping the queue to spend another $15 on a gamble, so hopefully my library gets me a copy before the winner is announced…
Heheh. Are you following some of the other prizelists as well? Or is your loyalty Giller-specific?
I keep tabs on most other award nominees, but the Giller is the only prize where I obsessively read the nominees. I’ll assume that counts as Giller-specific loyalty…
I’m the same way as you are with the Giller nonimnees. Although Canada Reads has some great longlisters as well. Also following Writers Trust, Governor General, Man Booker at the moment. The library hold list is ever growing.
I’ve been gradually widening the net with the GG’s; this year I’m having a look at the children’s illustration category nominees too. Needless to say that hasn’t helped with the hold list situation. This year’s Man Booker shortlist was really tempting, but I would have had to have started much earlier to get anywhere with that!
I’ve gone through phases where I’ve obsessively read the nominees for other Canadian literary awards, but I think if I were to add them all up, I’d’ve read more of the Giller books over the years than the rest.
I have read more Giller winners than the other awards. I generally find I like the Giller winners more than GG.
This is the one book on the Giller shortlist that seems to be evading my interest. Judging by the super-late release of the e-book edition, I’d say the publicists at Viking didn’t even feel confident about the chances of 419 being shortlisted. I read Jules’ review, and must admit that her impression seems more in line with my expectations—although your description of a greed tax has at least piqued my interest…
It’s actually one that had been recommended to me by two reading friends prior to its Giller listing, but I haven’t read any of his other books and didn’t jump at the recommendation. Are you still planning to give it a try, or will you pass?
I was surprised & very surprised, as Shan was. And I’m glad 419 is doing so well. I carried those characters around in my head for weeks – especially Nnambi. Really, the story in this book is in Africa. (Hang on, Jules, it’s about to start.)
In the middle of the book, I would have predicted that it was Winston whose character would stick, but in the end, I agree, it’s Nnambi’s story that resonates beyond the resolution.
I have to admit that I am really curious about this book after reading what you had to say about it. I know of the 419 scams, and have gotten loads of emails from them, but this is a spin that is entirely different. Thanks for sharing this. I might have to see if I can find the time for this book. It sounds wonderful and slightly strange, which is perfect for me.
What makes it especially interesting is that you could read it just as a thriller; from the moment that the reader learns that there are multiple tire tracks leading off the road, you want to know what happens, and this intensifies as you discover that it’s definitely not a simple answer. But as I read on, I realized that there were far more layers than first appeared; if you do add it to your stack, I hope you enjoy it!
While I enjoyed this book (did find the North American scenes a bit slow but loved the action in Africa) I have to admit I was pleasantly surprised when I saw it long listed for the Giller and very surprised when I saw it on the short list! I’m happy for Ferguson though, a departure from his usual writing and such a good transition I’m happy to see it being recognized.
That’s the thing: there are so many good books on the longlist but not all of them can fit on the shortlist. I’m not disappointed to see 419 on it, and it’s refreshing to see a book which has a thrilling plot on the list (when so many of the Giller books are quieter works). I haven’t read others of his, only dabbled. Any recommendations?
It looks like you enjoyed this book more than I am. I’m about a third of the way through and I’m questing whether or not I’ll even finish it. I can’r stand the over explained analysis of how the internet scam worked on Lauren’s Dad. It’s become so repetitive every time it focuses on Lauren I want to chuck the book across the room. The only narrative I find interesting the woman from Sahel. I want to know what happens, and find her story, but I don’t know if I can get past the drivel in the book just to find out.
Rant over. I am glad you found a lot of layers and meaning to the book.
What do you think about this years Shortlist?
Hah! Well, if you’re a third of the way through, you are about to reach the point where the focus shifts from North America to Africa, so just hang in there if you want to know more about the woman who is travelling. Laura’s role definitely settles into the background for a good chunk (and doesn’t entirely resurface in the way that it exists at the start: after all, her dad is but one of many).
I think it might feel like overexplaining about the scam because readers hear about it from so many characters, but it’s not explained the same way every time; there are subtle differences in how it’s portrayed (sometimes with more of an emphasis on greed, others not, for instance) and I think it all adds to the question of how we individually weigh who is responsible in these complicated situations. But, if you’re annoyed by it, I don’t imagine anything I say will help you feel less annoyed!
So the shortlist is the shortlist, and I’m a bit disappointed that Hough’s and Davis’ novels weren’t included because they are such strong works and strong stories, but I am not disappointed to see the others on the list either; I am still reading Ru, but I think the others are quality work too. What do you think, and Which ones are left on your list now? (Other than the 73 that you added from the long-long list!)
I’ve read 8 books. Just finished One Good Hustle and the Imposter Bride. I enjoyed One Good Hustle, but didnt like Imposter Bride. For the shortlist, I was hoping Celona’s book would have made it. I haven’t read Davies book yet. I’ll probably keep reading 419. I added it to a reading challenge lists, so ill stick it through. I hope I enjoy the last bit more,
I’m halfway into Ru and then I’ll read Livingston’s novel (pleased to see you enjoyed it), then Annabel Lyon’s (which means reading The Golden Mean too). Celona’s and Fagan’s will be last on my list (only because I don’t yet have copies of either). I’ll be interested to hear why you didn’t like The Imposter Bride; I’ll have to see what other reviews you’ve posted that I may have missed. Which challenge does Ferguson’s novel fit? I bet Debbie needs to know…