The characters in Shani Mootoo’s fiction often carry a burden. Cereus Blooms at Night (1996) is a lyrical and painful story of reconciling past trauma with present-day understanding (and a personal favourite).
In Moving Sideways Like a Crab (2014), one character believes that all they “learned about women and about men, including what [they] had learned as a child parented by two women, seemed now to be a lie”.
The heart of the story in Polar Vortex spirals around our efforts to construct and reconstruct the truth, to build and rebuild our selves, to create and sustain meaningful connections in our lives.
The bulk of the narrative rests with Priya. Readers travel back in time with her, to her student days, when her “kitchen cupboards tended to be empty, save for cans of ravioli and packages of ramen”. Back then, a lesbian love interest cooled and Priya turned inward; years later, when she reconnects with Prakash on social media, she remembers how significant he was to her recovery, her reemergence from that dark time.
Priya knows that she was still feeling at odds with herself back then. “Time had passed since I’d emigrated, and yet I had long remained terrified there’d be a Trinidadian lurking somewhere who’d see me and report back home to the entire country.” And, so, she hadn’t been forthright with Prakash about her sexuality, neither in particular regarding the woman they both knew, nor generally, regarding her own orientation; as a result, the lingering tension spreads to her current relationship when Priya announces that Prakash will be visiting.
Priya’s present-day partner, Alex, immediately has questions: “You and I, we don’t share a past. I’m impressed that he, a straight married man, the father of three children, would come all the way down here to seek you out after so many years, and he intends to spend a night. What doesn’t make sense is that he’d come on his own, without his family?”
These questions are heard through Priya’s narration but, later, the narrative shifts to afford direct access to Alex’s perspective. That segment of the novel offers some balance and resolution but mostly resides in the need to accept that resolution is often unavailable.
In one sense, Priya and Prakash and Alex are all presented in the process of becoming, forever unspooling:
“When you’re young, it’s inconceivable you’d ever reach your parents’ age, and when you do arrive at the age at which they had once seemed so ancient, the world has changed so much and you realize they were not role models for the changed world you’re living in. There’s triumph and disappointment at once. It’s a miracle we survived our youth and evolved in the ways we have.”
Whether or not these characters have known one another for a few years or for many years, unanswered questions that hover at the margins. What we speak of, how we speak of it, the weight of the unsaid: these things make us who we are. But what happens when we do not understand our own selves—how much can we share?
“As Prakash spoke, I realized that, forty-three years later, in telling this part of his life, he used words that were of a different time and place. Lorry. Jitney. Traders. Hooligans. Words, I thought likely exchanged among people here who’d survived the same experiences, those people he’d told us about whose only bond was this singularly profound and defining experience. I asked him if he had been scared.
‘Yes, yes. I’m coming to all of that,’ he said.”
Here, Prakash is speaking, but Polar Vortex is really Priya saying “Yes, yes. I’m coming to all of that.” With some impatience for having been pressed for explanations. And a swath of emotions that aren’t named, that might only be recognizable when someone else forces an uncomfortable confrontation with what’s been consigned to the past for too long.
Giller-bility
Mootoo’s novel examines and exposes contradictions in how we construct and conflate our selves, a timely theme. Shortlisted for the fourth Giller Prize for her debut novel in 1997—when the jury was comprised of Bonnie Burnard, Mavis Gallant, and Peter Gzowski—Mootoo was an early contender. (That year, Mordecai Richler’s Barney’s Version won.) Later, in 2014, Moving Forward Sideways like a Crab was longlisted (Sean Michaels’ Us Conductors won that year.) Now having advanced to the shortlist, Polar Vortex’s odds are looking good.
Inner workings
In Mootoo’s earlier works, I’ve appreciated the way she embeds echoes in her story, so that an image seems to repeat and intensify as her story unfolds. A topsy-turvy conceit replayed through Moving Sideways Like a Crab, suiting a story about subverting expectations. This aspect of crafting didn’t resonate for in this novel, perhaps because the theme revolves around a fragmented identity: “Discretions and half-truths were par for the course in those early days when she and I were courting each other.”
Language
When moving into emotionally fraught territory, it makes sense to pare down the language.
Sometimes the most devastating observations can inhabit the simplest vocabulary:
“I had gone mad. And, back then, I did uncharacteristic things. Yes, one could say I had gone mad.
How angry has he been? How mad is he now?”
Locale
“The house is quiet. Alex is probably upstairs in her office, ensconced in her writing.”
This story could have played out against any backdrop.
The miles that Priya is crossing are in her mind, rather than a trail one can trace on a map.
Engagement
Opening with a brief and italicized scene, which turns out to be a dream, Polar Vortex is primarily interior and reflective commentary. Inward realizations and discoveries will appeal to those who enjoy psychologically driven narratives; the short chapters at the beginning will enlarge that readership somewhat, but ultimately this is a quiet novel about thoughts and feelings, designed to please readers committed to character-driven narratives.
Readers Wanted
You’ve watched every season of “In Treatment”. And “EastSiders”.
You appreciate an attractive book cover (Designer, Ingrid Paulson).
You enjoy considering whether information is relayed via indirect or direct dialogue and teasing out little details about perspective, that seem to hold clues to what’s left unsaid, but ultimately you’re fine with the idea that maybe none of that matters.
Here’s something interesting… I tried reading Cereus Blooms a few years ago (I think when Sideways Like a Crab came out), but there was something about it I didn’t like and I never finished it. ducks So I was curious to read this one. Based on what you say in your review, I’m guessing this book is different than her others? But I loved it. I loved that we were so much in their heads (mostly Priya’s but I loved the short foray into Alex’s as well). And that everything about the relationships were so complicated it was hard to say what was what.
A re-read of Cereus in probably in order.
As I remember it (but it’s been more than twenty years, I think?), the writing was more lyrical and poetic than Polar Vortex, but this book seems so different on that score, that I wonder if maybe I just wasn’t as familiar with more lyrical writing then, so even the occasional bit would have stood out more. Maybe I should reread as well!
Because the past seemed to be so key in this story, I am curious as to why she chose to shift into only the two women’s perspectives; if it had just been Priya’s the whole way through, I wouldn’t have wondered about that, or if there had been several key characters and only the married couple’s voices were at the core of it all, that would have made sense to me too, but shifting into Alex’s later in the day, but then not sharing the third POV, raises questions for me. And, look, yet another great option for your LW group!
Oh yeah, I see what you mean. I was too busy enjoying it to think too much about the whys of it. Now I wonder what it would have been like to hear from Prakash. How much was he really hurting? Cuz I felt so sorry for him at times. And, at times, it felt like such a lonely story. I did feel relief when the narrator switched to Alex for a bit. And curiosity about how Priya appeared to others, rather than what was going through her head all the time. Everyone was so torn.
I agree completely: they were all shattered, fragmented, each in their own way. And, yes, I also agree that it would have been dissatisfying to have remained in Priya’s POV for the whole time, unless there was some other way to reveal the information that we eventually glean from the other characters (Alex, directly and Prakash indirectly via Alex’s observations of him). I also want to know more about what Prakash thinks/feels about looking back on that early friendship with Priya, because even though we do learn things from what he says when he arrives for a visit, there are probably things that he wouldn’t say to/around Alex/Priya, and his experiences back then were so complicated too. (And he doesn’t come off all that well from Priya’s initial descriptions! Or maybe that’s just my take on early-Prakash?)
I thought that too about Prakash. but then I wondered if Priya was just trying to convince herself that it was him, not her. My mind kept flipping between do I like this guy or do I not like him? Does Priya really know what she’s saying, or is she just as confused about him as he seems to be about her? I want to know!
That’s what I was thinking, too! That it might have been more comfortable for Priya to put the responsibility on him for having instigated a change in their relationship, but maybe part of her wanted that change, too (i.e. a way to make things easier with her family, for instance–I’m being vague, but trying to avoid spoiling LOL). That’s why I was craving the third perspective, because at the end we feel like we understand her position, we understand Alex’s position, but maybe Prakash was a jerk or maybe he was used/mistreated, or maybe something between. And we do receive a lot of information vicariously (through Alex), so Prakash’s backstory was obviously built-out on paper, so I don’t understand the excluded/included intentions.
In that sense, I think it’s interesting to compare this novel to Consent, which I know you’re reading now: how certain characters are given voices and how certain characters are silenced in the narrative. Are you done Consent yet? 🙂 Feel free to shift our chat to that post, if you like!
I am almost done! I decided not to read your review until I’m all done – and then I’ll shift over!
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I’m so curious about this book, its been ages since I’ve read any Shani Mootoo. Glad to see book*hug made the shortlist though, its always nice to see really small presses on the giller list. Books about relationships generally appeal to me, and this sounds no different 😉
The longlist made me smile for all the small-press love: it’s one of my favourite longlists in a while! If it’s been ages, did you read Cereus? I absolutely LOVED that book so hard.
Hmm no I haven’t read it! Good to know it should go on my TBR I think